My Latest Book
Published by Butler
Books of Louisville
***Drawing Sentences*** ~
A Guide to Diagramming ~ Drawing
Sentences: A Guide to Diagramming is comprised in large measure
of the teacher's editions of my previously published books A First Book of Sentence Diagramming,
A
Second Book of Sentence Diagramming, and A Workbook of
Sentence Diagramming. These books constitute Parts One, Two, and
Three, respectively, of Drawing Sentences. In addition to hundreds
of model diagrams and many pages of explanatory material, the new book
contains scores of exercises, diagramming solutions for all sentences of
all exercises, unit tests (and answers) in Parts One and Two, a detailed
table of contents, a preface on the history of diagramming, an impressive
section of grammatical terms and diagramming symbols, and an index.
Part One contains
115 model
diagrams and 250 sentences for students to diagram. Part One has eight
units, each consisting of three lessons and one review page. Thirteen
pages of answers (i.e.,
diagrams of all 250 sentences) are found at the end of Part One. Part
Two begins where Part One ends and has the same basic structure.
Part Two provides 82 model diagrams and 201 sentences for students to
diagram. Twenty-one pages of answers (i.e., diagrams of all 201 sentences) are found at the
end of Part Two. Parts
One and Two have eight unit tests each as well as solutions for all
tests. Part
Three contains 115 diagramming
examples ranging in difficulty from very easy to very difficult, 30
exercises containing 274 sentences to be diagrammed, a separate answer
section with a diagram and a verbal analysis of each sentence,
and a concluding section of 30 sentences of medium length (with
solutions), intended as a review of most of the diagramming concepts
presented in the book.
Drawing Sentences is the
perfect choice for elementary-, middle-, and high-school teachers and for homeschool moms and
dads. They can acquire a thorough knowledge of sentence diagramming by working
through Part Three, thereby preparing themselves to guide their students
through Parts One and Two. Part Three can also be used by industrious
students to complement and supplement Parts One and Two. Perhaps
the best way to get to know a book is to view its pages. A series of links
will allow you to do just that. Please excuse the less-than-perfect
quality of my scans. The quality of the book pages themselves is
excellent. The page size of the scans varies slightly but is approximately
the same as the page size of the book (8 1/2/" x 11"). -
Table of Contents: (four pages) -
Part One, Unit III (five pages) -
Part Two, Unit III (four pages) -
Part Three, Diagramming Examples (2 of
28 pages) -
Part Three, Solutions (4 of 68 pages) -
Grammatical Terms and Diagramming Symbols (1 of 5 pages) If
you have questions about Drawing Sentences or about any of my
books, please write to me at ermoutoux@juno.com.
To order, please go to the web site of Butler Books at www.butlerbooks.com
and select my book from their menu, or click here
to view an order form that can be printed and sent by fax or snail mail to
Butler Books. My other books should be ordered directly from me. *
* * * * Nota
bene! I still
have on hand 12 copies of the teacher's edition of A First Book of
Sentence Diagramming ($15), 11 copies of the teacher's edition
of A Second Book of Sentence Diagramming ($16), and 9 copies of the
teacher's edition of A Workbook of Sentence Diagramming ($14). I do
not plan to reprint these editions when the present supply is gone. I
would encourage you to consider buying Drawing Sentences: A Guide to
Diagramming, which includes all three of these editions. Student
copies of A First Book of Sentence Diagramming, A Second Book of
Sentence Diagramming, and A Workbook of Sentence Diagramming (which
can be used as student copies for Parts One, Two, and Three, respectively,
of Drawing Sentences) will remain available for the
foreseeable future. The price is $12.50 each.
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***Diagramming Step by
Step*** ~ One
Hundred and Fifty-five Steps to Diagramming Excellence ~
Diagramming Step by Step: One Hundred and Fifty-five Steps
to Diagramming Excellence, my fourth book of sentence diagramming, is similar to the second edition of A
Workbook of Sentence Diagramming; however, there are several important
differences:
1 - The examples and exercises of Diagramming
Step by Step are completely new.
2 - The teacher's edition of Diagramming Step by Step
has 158 pages, 44 more than A Workbook of Sentence Diagramming. Student
copies are also available. They do not have answers in the back; in
every other respect, they are the same as the teacher's edition.
3 - Diagramming Step by Step
has 40 more diagramming examples than A Workbook of Sentence
Diagramming.
4 - Diagramming Step by Step
has 83 more sentences for students to diagram; moreover, ten of these
sentences have more than 100 words each. A Workbook of Sentence
Diagramming has no sentences of this length. Click here to see one of
these 100-word sentences.
5 - The instructional section of the book
is divided into 24 lessons, each with a page of grammar explanation, a
page of model diagrams, and a page of sentences to be diagrammed by the
student. Click here to see an entire lesson (three pages). I
regret the poor quality of some images.
6 - In a section entitled
"People in the Park," a storyteller (that's me) tells stories
about the lives of people in the park, and the student is expected to
diagram the sentences of these stories. Grammar hints are provided for
those who need them. Click here to see one of the stories.
Click here to see the table of
contents.
Like the second edition of A
Workbook of Sentence Diagramming, the teacher's edition of Diagramming Step by Step has,
in the back, "answers" (diagrams and explanations) for every
sentence in every exercise, including "People in the Park" and
"100-word Sentences."
Should you buy this book if you
already have A Workbook of Sentence Diagramming? Not necessarily,
but if you are looking for additional diagramming challenges for yourself or
your students, you will find plenty in this book.
Should you buy this book instead of A
Workbook of Sentence Diagramming? Again, not necessarily. This book
may have more material than you need.
Diagramming Step by Step is
also available in an enlarged edition. It features 24 additional pages,
each entitled "Writing Correctly." These pages offer students
writing tips related to the topics of the corresponding 24 lessons. Click here
to view two of these pages.
I have dedicated this book to my
recently deceased wife of 41 years, Joni. For that reason, I have tried to
make it my best diagramming book. If I ever seek a publisher for one of my
books, this will be the one. Click here to view
pictures of Joni and to read about her life and death.
Teachers purchasing a copy of this
book may photocopy all or some of its pages for free distribution to their
students.
The price of the teacher's
edition of Diagramming
Step by Step is $18.* A student copy sells for $12.50. The enlarged
edition (the teacher's edition with 24 pages of writing tips--182 pages in
all) sells for $20. The prices,
which include handling and media-mail shipment within the United States,
are slightly
less per book if multiple copies are ordered. If you want to buy one or more copies of
this book, please email me at ermoutoux@juno.com.
I will send you my address and you can then
mail me a check or money order (no cash or credit card numbers, please).
Don't forget to include the address to which you want the book or books
sent. Please allow 10-14 days for delivery.
*As of November 2, 2009, I
have fewer than ten copies of the regular teacher's edition ($18) left.
This edition will not be reprinted; when the remaining copies are gone,
the only teacher's edition available will be the teacher's enlarged
edition ($20).
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New in 2009! ***
Analyzing the Grammar of Literature *** Diagrams
of 130 Long Sentences from British and American Writers
This, my fifth book of sentence diagramming, is
unlike any of the other four and, to the best of my knowledge, unlike any
other book available. It is not for beginners. It offers 130 sentences
gleaned from the works of 57 British and American writers. The shortest
sentence in the collection has 70 words, the longest 472. The median
length (the length of the sentence right in the middle) is 100 words; to
be precise, Sentence 65 has 99 words, Sentence 66 has 100.
Diagrams of all 130 sentences are contained in in
the "back" of the book, i.e., in the final five-sixths of the
book. Each diagram occupies at least one page of the book; the longest
covers four pages.
Degree of syntactic difficulty played no role in
the selection of sentences. Sentence length and author’s literary
reputation were the major criteria.
The authors represented in this book are Henry
Adams, Matthew Arnold, Jane Austin, James Boswell, Charlotte Brontë,
Samuel Butler, George Washington Cable, Lewis Carroll, Samuel Coleridge,
Joseph Conrad, James Fennimore Cooper, Daniel Defoe, Charles
Dickens, Arthur Conan Doyle, George Eliot, Ralph Waldo Emerson, William
Faulkner, Henry Fielding, F. Scott Fitzgerald, Benjamin Franklin, Oliver
Goldsmith, Graham Greene, Thomas Hardy, Nathaniel Hawthorne, Ernest
Hemingway, O. Henry, Washington Irving, William James, Thomas Jefferson,
Sarah Orne Jewett, Samuel Johnson, James Joyce, Abraham Lincoln, Herman
Melville, James Michener, John Stuart Mill, Cardinal Newman, Edgar Allan
Poe, Budd Schulberg, John O'Hara, Sir Walter Scott, Adam Smith, Gertrude
Stein, Lawrence Sterne, Harriet Beecher Stowe, William Thackeray, Henry
David Thoreau, Anthony Trollope, Mark Twain, Robert Penn Warren, Eudora
Welty, Edith Wharton, Walt Whitman, Oscar Wilde, Thomas Wolfe, Virginia
Wolfe, and William Wordsworth.
Teachers purchasing a copy of this
book may photocopy all or some of its pages for free distribution to their
students.
Analyzing the Grammar of
Literature has 185 8 1/2" x 11" pages;
it has a soft cover protected by a plastic
overlay. Click here to see the cover. The price of the book is
$22, which includes handling and media-mail shipment within the United
States. Multiple copies cost slightly less. If you want to buy one or more copies of
this book, please email me at ermoutoux@juno.com.
I will send you my address and you can then
mail me a check or money order (no cash or credit card numbers, please).
Don't forget to include the address to which you want the book or books
sent. Please allow 10-14 days for delivery.
May 31, 2011
Your
website is fantastic. I’m teaching my college juniors and seniors to
diagram (only one or two have ever done it) and I’m determined to make
them capable writers in the process. Thank you.
Virginia Martin
Dept. of Communication
University at Albany (New York)
Received
your wonderful book [Diagramming Step by Step] yesterday. It looks
very professional and comprehensive! My husband and I look forward to
putting it on our schedule to study.
Kathy Heerensperger, a retired teacher
A teacher in a small Christian school writes as follows about a classroom
experience in her first year: "Can you imagine eight junior high students gathered
around the board, discussing, analyzing, and diagramming sentences?
I would not have believed it until this year." Like Kitty Burns
Florey, author of Sister Bernadette's Barking Dog, Ms.
Riege was introduced to sentence diagramming by a nun. "Sister
Mary Redemptra had us all convinced that we would not get past the
pearly gates unless we could pass a diagram test given to us by
St. Peter." I am especially grateful to Ms. Riege for the
following kind words: "When I discovered your books and saw the
seriousness of your diagrams, the depth, and the respect for this
old tradition, I was quite happy."
Cheryl Riege, Pierce, Nebraska
"I am currently working with a 9th grader who
has dyslexia and could not read in 7th grade. After working
with him for two years and teaching him to read up to a 12th grade
level using the Barton Reading System--an Orton-Gillingham based
method, I decided to incorporate sentence diagramming. It's
amazing how much easier I can teach grammar because he learns in a
very linear and structured fashion! . . . I have a
student whom I taught grammar by simply underlining and labeling the
parts of sentences and parts of speech. However, she failed a
quiz at school when she had to diagram ten sentences. I
quickly switched to sentence diagramming, and now she can easily
toggle back and forth between labeling and diagramming. Now,
she visually sees the connections in a sentence! . . . I
currently have ten clients who love to diagram sentences."
Connie Whitcraft <http://www.whitcraftlearningsolutions.com>
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